March 01, 2006

Strange Angels Revisions

I've begun my revisions. I hope to have the whole thing done in two months.

Prologue - 3/1/06
starting count: 328
End count: 470
difference: 142

why it's better: a little tighter, a little more fear as well as a bit more reason and rationale.

Prologue down - many chapters to go.

~S

Posted by Shade53 at March 1, 2006 11:32 AM
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