Chapter Three: 4/2/06
Starting Count: 1505
End COunt: 2177
Difference: 672
Why it's better: better interacting with the Rousl, decent first explanation of Sencha's power and control and the Rousl's devotion. better emotion at the homecoming. more ambience throughout.
Total Word Count: 6,801/90,000
Posted by Shade53 at April 2, 2006 02:46 PM